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a) thing, getting worse The rate of crime could rise, thus people must be concerned about it b) lots, don't The rate of unemployment is high c) sometime In the near future a vaccine os Malaria may be found d) The brands of japanese property decreased considerably e) can't, you The numbers on the report are unreilable f) Sadly, so on The high inflation led to poverty and social unrest g) Idioms He was euphoric when he won the prize h) Students must/should be paid to learn i) few years On 1987 women were able to vote j) There were three main causes of the Russian Revolution

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My first outline: "Does humour has limits?"

I:  (I think that) Limits in humour must not be stated for these reasons: humour depends on the subject, it is better to laugh than being depressed and it could create new kind of humour. II: Humour is subjetive A It depends on the subjet 1 Percentage of "black humour" comedians 2 Quotation of Fred Allen and Steve Allen B Freedom on humour C Famous comedians who talked about this topic 1 Fred and Steve Allen 2 David Suarez 3 Lynda Barry III: It is better to laugh than to be depressed A Laugh or be depressed about current social problems? 1 Percentage of depression 2 Racism 3 Machism B Laugh ot be depressed about history problems? 1 Jews 2 Nazism 3 Christianity IV: New type of humour A Random humour 1 It's popularity 2 Shitposts 3 It's popularity has been rising. B "Super Black Humour" 1 Having a big number of critics 2 Objetive 3 Representation on media and it popularity V: As conclusion, humour does not need limits, because t

Writing thesis statements

- Goverment survellance: Pro  1. Goverment can avoid many virtual and physical attacks 2. Controlling people equals having a better control of the country 3. Improving consume by posting ads. (I think that) Goverment Survellance is a good method to avoid social and physical disasters, to have a better control on people and to improve consumism. - Gun ownership: Cons 1. Avoid school shooting 2. Everyone can earn one, but they don't know how to use it 3. Avoid coup d'etat. (I think that) Gun ownership must be forbidden in all countries in order to solve problems such as school shooting, inexperienced people would make some mistakes, and coup d' etats. - Globalization: Cons 1. Ancient cultures just disappears 2. Makes a lower percentage on having new original ideas 3. Country esence just disappears. (I think that) globalization does affect to sections such as Culture, original ideas, and history.ç - Humour has no limits: Pro 1. Humour is subject

25. A movie star/singer you like

By way of introduction, celebrities is a topic too discussed. In my case, I love Emma Watson for many reasons. The first reason and most important one is how she take advantage of her fame and influence in order to state her opinions and trying to change the world to a better place. She declared herself femisist at the age of 19, and she has been fighting for women right since that moment. She had given speeches all around the world and helped a good number of women who had been victims of machism. Femisism is not the only movement she support, racism and the end of child labor; but here is stated her history with feminism because is the cause she helped the most. In addition, there are some quotes from Emma Watson I want to leave in this writting, "In my nervousness for this speech and my moments of doubt, I've told myself firmly, If not me, who? If not now, when?"; "Feminism is not here to dictate to you. It's not prescrptive, it's not dogmatic. All w

17. A good friend

The concept of a good friend is always changing nowadays, however, there are unique characteristics and functions a good friend needs to have, because being a good friend is very important, you have to be with your friend in a bad situation, have a connection and allow your friends act the way they are. The first and most important role consists in helping their friends and stay with them in a bad situation, in order to cheer he/she up, however a good friend has a mission on those situations, regardless of  your situation, whether you are happy or sad, your mission is to stay with him/her, because solving a problem is always easier in group than lonely. In addition, there is a quote that explain what I am saying: "A friend is someone who helps you when you're down, and if they can't, they lay down beside you and litsen" by Winnie the Poo. Therefore, we have that the most important role a good friend has is to always stay with you when you are down and spend time

The best car to own

For people good cars are the ones who have two only places, go fast, and pollute the most nowadays. However, this it is not real. First of all, good cars must be comfortable in order to give the driver the best way to drive. As the first characteristic and one of the most important one, most of the cars should have it. The reasons are simple, being comfortable allow drivers to travel for more time and it also reduce the percentage of accidents. Most truck drivers state that being comfortable is the most important think for a long trip, therefore not having discomforts on the body. Hence being more comfortable make drivers able to focus more on the road than on the pain, reducing accidents. Therefore, good cars must be comfortable in order to allow driver make longer trips and reducing accident percentage Pollution is becomming a bigger threat nowadays, thus automoviles companies must focus on reducing petrol release from cars or even making electric ones. So it is an important